So a short story short, but we waited for a bunch of trains thinking that we were going to the Bronx Zoo, but we went to Central Park and sat out the whole time.
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ReplyDeleteOne sentence????? TELL ME MORE! We've talked about this. I as the reader have a million questions! It's unfair to me, the reader, when you write one sentence and assume I can understand/empathize with you. I imagine if JK Rowling wrote Harry Potter as just one chapter. Would the world have loved it as much as it did? Would she have become such a well known writer?
ReplyDeleteYour ideas, thoughts and experiences are valuable. Don't hold back from the reader. Share more. Take a risk! :)