Friday, July 4, 2014
My Sister's Birthday Gift (Coney Island)
Before I tell about how much fun I had at Coney Island yesterday, but first let a little about myself. I'm only eleven years old and I'm going to seventh grade. For those who you are also going to seventh grade or just middle school in general I have this to say: You know those movies where the main character goes to a new place and he/she doesn't like it, but in the end they are cool about the adjustment. Enough about me, here my fourth experience in Coney Insland. Yesterday I woke up really early to go to Coney Island because we were suppose to leave for ten o'clock so we had time to pick up my cousin.Before I end the post, my favorites rides Soarin' Eagles, Steeplechase, Luna 360, and Air Race. Farewell for now -Omar James
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You got me hooked in the first paragraph and didn't finish the story? Yeah I know those movies! Is that how your first year of middle school was? Or do you feel differently. Finish with your great thoughts because we, the readers, want to know.
ReplyDeleteAlso tell me more about Coney Island! Is that your sister's favorite place? Did she choose to go there or did you choose to surprise her? Tell me more and keep up the great work!